Status Updates From Pins and Needles

Finding a spelling typo in the final pages, gate instead of gait is a bummer, but the excitement fizzled out before then, so... 😔

“What a family…,” Hawk muttered.

Ain't that the truth. 🙂‍↕

Kinda wordy and dialogue-heavy, but I'm... Liking it? 🧐🤔

Woah. This keeps getting better/worse

Like it so far...

This was off to a really good start, but then slowed down a lot! I forgive all the technical talk about legal stuff, oil pumping rigs and even tattoos (who tattoos over fresh scars anyways???), but the interacting was just going slow slow slow, and now they are hung up on bad communication. The two presumably outspoken guys can not say what they mean out loud? This is annoying.

So emotionally involved I nearly threw my phone across the room.