Status Updates From Be Your Mistake (Be Yours)

My God its so hard to like these guys, I have no idea how I've gotten this far.....especially Wes, man I don't like him. And that conversation between Wes & Shane while he was driving was more like a therapy session than two non-friends having ng a random conversation about whose sleeping with who.
Other than when they're having sex, I just find both of them annoying.

Wes confuses me. Does he want miles or not? Technically, yes, I know he does. But why is he so confusing to understand? Maybe the author didn’t know how to write him?

Ok. I think I we get it by this pint in the book that Miles only sees Jamie as a brother. Why is always brought up?

So Wes has met Jamie one time, and Jamie tells him everything??

The story is fine so far. But it needs some editing for grammar and continuity.