Status Updates From The Ultimate Dracula

I assume "Nina" is supposed to be "Mina."

Typo: "So we were were splashing..."

"Lucrada." Hmm. Kudos for an anagram less obvious than "Alucard."

"The man who called himself 'monsieur'" should be capitalized.

Typo: "in color in texture" should be something like "in color OR texture."

Missing quotation mark after "Vampire Dreams."

Typo: the same paragraph is repeated on the bottom of page 221 and the top of page 222.

"We'll I've had her twice" should trade that apostrophe in for a comma.

Typo: "Appeared at the top of the top of the stairs."

Typo: "The vampire cried" shouldn't be capitalized, as it's a dialogue tag.

"He knew was doing perfectly" should be "He knew HE was doing perfectly."

"...and Dracula's sexy and mysterious manner drew women to him like flies to honey."

That's...questionable. Yeah, he's attractive to the female viewer, but most stories about him having him stalking a woman, not them pursuing him. Even if they seem "seduced," it's generally with at least an implication of mind control being involved.

Typo: "A soft wind sifted and and scattered..."

Also a missing quotation mark at "Oh Richard, we are home!"

Another typo: "letting the those towers."

Okay, first up, I like Polidori's The Vampyre so screw you.

Secondly, typo: an extra comma in "...which moves, us, if it does at all..."