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S.D. Reeves
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So far this book is
1) 90% inner monologue.
2) Tension-less and tedious
Some other notes:
1) The characters feel like they are waiting around on a conveyor belt to be introduced.
2) The writing is bland
3) lots of telling vs showing
4) Characters indistinguishable
5) Motivations/emotions inconsistent
— Jun 15, 2020 04:43PM
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1) 90% inner monologue.
2) Tension-less and tedious
Some other notes:
1) The characters feel like they are waiting around on a conveyor belt to be introduced.
2) The writing is bland
3) lots of telling vs showing
4) Characters indistinguishable
5) Motivations/emotions inconsistent
