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Manalye
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The first chapter is very disjointed. Interesting, but not making a lot of sense. The dialogue between the first three characters doesn't flow and is hard to follow.
I think ( I'm not sure because it isn't said explicitly) that these characters are supposed to be adults- 30s or 40s maybe? But they read like teenagers. Which is not helping an already disjointed book.
I'm going to keep reading though.
— Apr 19, 2021 05:31PM
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I think ( I'm not sure because it isn't said explicitly) that these characters are supposed to be adults- 30s or 40s maybe? But they read like teenagers. Which is not helping an already disjointed book.
I'm going to keep reading though.
