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✨Briana B.
is 77% done
I am almost done I promise! The world cup and all things soccer have taken over my life.
— Jun 15, 2026 04:43PM
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Athami
is 37% done
This is exceptionally bad, I'm surprised I haven't made to move to DNF it. Maybe not bad enough? The characterization is absolute garbage. You cannot convince me that when you're starving to literal death that you refuse to eat meat (as a vegetarian) when offered. She's whiny 24/7, and he only asks "what is wrong with you" or "are you crazy"
— Jun 14, 2026 04:14AM
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Amelie W
is on page 231 of 396
Holy miscommunication and mixed signals
— Apr 04, 2026 11:02PM
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Marilyn
is on page 240 of 396
The inner conflict dialogue is getting too repetitive
— Mar 25, 2026 05:12PM
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Amy P
is 2% done
• voice-first writing vs showing
• FMC narrating like she’s performing personality
• banter + self-commentary that undercuts danger
• “look how quirky/clever I am” tone in a world that should be terrifying
Full of tonal dissonance that I can’t even finish the 1st chapter. I can tell I am not going to like the author’s tone. This should be darker.
— Feb 02, 2026 07:04PM
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• FMC narrating like she’s performing personality
• banter + self-commentary that undercuts danger
• “look how quirky/clever I am” tone in a world that should be terrifying
Full of tonal dissonance that I can’t even finish the 1st chapter. I can tell I am not going to like the author’s tone. This should be darker.









