Status Updates From The Wall (Sumer, #1)

I am enjoying the premise, and closed system environments are always fun to write in, but there are a few issues. A lot isn’t clear. The characters haven’t developed voices of their own in the story, which a good editor should have helped with. The world is well done, but perhaps a little more exposition was necessary early on to establish the “why” for the world as well.

Enjoying this journey with Mithila Seven and her thoughts.