Status Updates From Levi (Lighthouse Security I...

DNFing… poorly written dialogue

“Baby, I don’t know what to say. It’s amazing. It’s more than amazing.” She stepped closer, her front pressed against his, arms around each other’s waists, holding each other. Her head tilted back, exposing her soft neck, but it was her dark eyes that held him captive. “You rescued me and I wanted to give you your heart’s desire, Levi.” He bent and kissed her lightly. “Babe, you are my heart’s desire.”

“Don’t leave me,” her tortured voice whispered in return. “Please, don’t leave me.” She closed her eyes but the death grip on his hand remained firm. Lifting the covers, he slid into bed next to her and wrapped his arms around her shaking body. She immediately stilled, her breaths slowing and becoming more even.

“Since no police report has been filed, I’ve got no reason to contact them. But I also don’t want her traveling with me. I’ll tell her in the morning that I’ve had a change of plans, and she’ll need to find her own way to Boston.”

Chapter 1 was a boring travelogue detailing every Levi ate...Hope this picks up soon can it's a novella.

Loved it!