Status Updates From Saving Sunflower (The Sun #1)

Oh to be young and dumb….

I just keep reminding myself he’s 21 and doesn’t know what doing better looks like 😤

I’ve been stuck at this part for a minute and I can’t find the will to get through this sex scene. There’s no way an argument about accountability, communication, transparency, and respect should be taking place while he’s roughly fucking and spanking Claudette because she (FINALLY) calls him on his bullshit.

Mind you he’s said point blank “I don’t do girlfriends” knowing her first everything is him.

The writing is phenomenal!

The characters on the other hand are FRUSTRATING—I don’t like that every time Claudette brings up legitimate grievances + criticisms of Dominic, he gets angry + turns to moment into sex. Rough sex at that. He has some major trauma that needs to get resolved with a therapist, not a naive, sheltered 18yo virgin. Her mind is so warped she can’t even confide in her best friend.

She loves her some struggle love that’s for sure

This has passed slow burn

The storyline is good but drawn out & the narration is not good.

3.75