Status Updates From The Unforgiven (Skharr Deat...

Sheesh. Conan much?

So Skharr finally reaches his dungeon destination and turns into a whining, incredulous creature. He's scared of everything, worried about everything, surprised by everything, and can't stop trying to outdo his own creative vulgarities at each one of these events. He seems to have lost his creativity, his intelligence, his experience, his intelligent speech, and pretty much most all of what made him a cool character.

I am enjoying Skharr and his exploits, but dang if this story doesn't plod. Good storytelling marred by poor writing. Could have been drastically improved by a strong edit. Skharr is a fun and formidable character though.

Skharr is...an interesting and entertaining fellow. The telling of his story is super long in the tooth though. I'll see where it and he leads, but certainly not an addictive nor mandatory read.