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Shannon
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I was enjoying the well known story told from Mary's point of view,. Then the writing, or editing becomes lazy. "Elizabeth could bear no more and stood up" After two paragraphs where there is no mention of her sitting down "Elizabeth stood up abruptly." I guess the author can think of no other way to show Elizabeth's emotion?
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