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Athena Wolfe
Athena Wolfe is on page 120 of 478
— Jun 05, 2025 08:40AM Add a comment
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Sharon
Sharon is 51% done
The passive voice is bugging the hell out of me now. "Ben had been cleaning the boat when Cassius arrived." Why not "Ben was cleaning the boat when Cassius arrived" instead? I don't get it.
— Mar 02, 2021 01:41PM Add a comment
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Sharon
Sharon is 42% done
Has this author ever been to a bayou? There is no “bayou stench.” Ye gods.
— Mar 01, 2021 09:31PM Add a comment
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Sharon
Sharon is 37% done
Weird misuse of adjectives, even more passive voice ... and now the mixed ethnicity buddy is described as unattractive while the white dude is, of course, handsome. I don’t know whether I feel like finishing this book.
— Mar 01, 2021 07:12AM Add a comment
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Sharon
Sharon is 22% done
So much passive voice. This author is overly fond of past participle.
— Feb 28, 2021 05:02AM Add a comment
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Sharon
Sharon is 21% done
Wow! Having a lead character spout xenophobic BS is not going to endear him to me.
— Feb 28, 2021 04:56AM Add a comment
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