Status Updates From The Cartographers

I think I’m gonna DNF this one. The premise and the plot are engaging but the interactions between characters just feel improbable to me. My breaking point was when we switched from a third person narrative to a first person narrative, but kept the same sorts of descriptions, “the door banged as I pushed it open and the room went quiet.” Most people don’t talk that way when telling their own story. 🫤

This full is full of twists, and while some of them are certainly predictable, I don’t think that necessarily hurts the entertainment value of them! I’m having a good time!