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kimberly_rose
kimberly_rose is on page 40
Fascinating ideas, but too repetitive and not enough emotional
exploration.
Mar 24, 2023 08:54AM Add a comment
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Aimora
Aimora is 20% done
May wind up a dnf. There are vampires and zombies and werewolves and they all go to high school together?
Jan 29, 2023 01:46PM Add a comment
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Rumy
Rumy is on page 14 of 212
Aug 09, 2022 02:47PM Add a comment
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Claire B **paused for now**
Claire B **paused for now** is 90% done
Repetitive, childish and lacking in plot. I even skimmed the sex scenes because there were too many and it all got boring. Not sure I can be arsed to read part two.

*2 Stars*
Jun 12, 2022 07:12AM Add a comment
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Claire B **paused for now**
Claire B **paused for now** is 58% done
Fern’s thoughts and actions don’t align. He just comes across as a child throwing a prolonged temper tantrum which is very frustrating. Many of the conflicts could be settled by having a conversation. Lack thereof is unrealistic and tiresome.
Jun 12, 2022 07:06AM Add a comment
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Claire B **paused for now**
Claire B **paused for now** is 44% done
The push and pull is at extinction levels…. My extinction.
Jun 12, 2022 03:54AM Add a comment
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Steph (Teacups & Tropes)
Steph (Teacups & Tropes) is 31% done
Omg 🤢

These molebat and bloodwhisper things are SO GROSS
Sep 02, 2021 10:34AM Add a comment
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Tess
Tess is 49% done
He cracked it open on top of my ass, letting it run between my cheeks. The cold yolk and whitening rolled down my skin, making me shiver. Sticky and smooth all at once, parts of it dripped down into my hole.
I moaned. “P—ervert. This isn’t me eating. This is another one of your—”
Don pressed fingers inside my ass, smearing the egg deep.

Idk how I feel about egg being fingered into holes
May 11, 2021 03:56AM Add a comment
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Tess
Tess is 8% done
His hands pinned mine against the ground. With one brutal thrust, he filled me, his balls slapping my ass hard. Pain burst behind my eyelids. My cries muffled into the mud. He grunted in pleasure and bit me harder, then he scooted me over, so I was completely on the quilt. He panted loudly against my ear as he moved inside me, turning the bitter pain into something almost pleasurable.
May 08, 2021 09:26PM Add a comment
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