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Halah Ahmad
is 15% done
The first 30 pages are unnecessary! We already that she is widow who lost her son , and he was mistaken for criminal !
— Sep 05, 2021 02:18AM
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Natasha
is 6% done
😫 How are you gonna kill this woman’s husband and son and then make her have a miscarriage in the first chapter? You don’t like her much, do you? Why not write her as a single debutante or spinster instead? Why couldn’t she be a widow with two children? 🧐
— Jul 06, 2021 04:51PM
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