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Fully realizing I haven't made it much further in the book, I'm still having issues. Though, now it's with the mmc. This is supposed to be a bodyguard romance, but the bodyguard is breaking so many rules in such a short amount of time that it's hard to find the story plausible. It is sorta instalove on his part, so maybe that's why?

I'm struggling with this one. It's very VERY descriptive, and I find myself getting bored halfway through a paragraph. It's also, so far, not what I expected based on the description. I thought it'd be more about the drama, but so far, it's mostly the set-up for the romance and the other characters.

Reread of this. Since the first time I read this I am better versed in spotting the red flags… this poor girl needed to have been in therapy, have had her name changed (when she was still 6), and certainly never objectified like this character was. I wanted to step in and tell her all the ways the MMC was just as creepy as her childhood nightmare…