Status Updates From Unbroken

Still a little rocky, but things are getting slightly better

Really trying to give this a chance but honestly, all these characters are idiots. Sadie's dialogue seems stuck on horny teenager, Cal is always bellowing in her ear (how is she not deaf yet?), the whole thing with Mickelson senior is basically rape and I just...I'm trying to give it a shot but if nothing changes (and fast) this is likely going to become a DNF

Normally, I'd be able to find some empathy/sympathy for these kind of situations. But something about this is not really clicking and I'm already rolling my eyes something fierce at all the players

So this is what it feels like being on a horseback after fucking. My pussy pulses against the saddle, and my thighs feel numb. I had orgasmed twice, intensely, but I still want more.

With every hoof’s click, I’m reminded of the challenge in riding with a horny crotch, while in front of me, Cal seems calm. How are his balls? I wonder.

So this is what it feels like being on a horseback after fucking. My pussy pulses against the saddle, and my thighs feel numb. I had orgasmed twice, intensely, but I still want more.

With every hoof’s click, I’m reminded of the challenge in riding with a horny crotch, while in front of me, Cal seems calm. How are his balls? I wonder.

Some readers said the *towel scene* as their favourite:

It is Cal, and he’s naked—well, almost, save for the towel barely clinging to his hips.

“Do you know where you are, huh?” he bellows in my ear. “A mountain lion will get you before you ever see another soul.”

His biceps bulge right under my mouth. I bite the mound of flesh, but if there’s anything that suits the term 'hard as stone', it’s Cal’s arm.

"When I agreed to kidnap Sadie, I knew I was playing with fire. Yet I kept playing. I can handle being burned, but right now I’m ablaze with absurdity. This massive energy called Sadie is overwhelming me with matters I can’t deal with."

Pre-order UNBROKEN now: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B08TWX6MKJ

UNBROKEN is getting early reviews:

"Tantalizing! Unbroken is an enticing cocktail mixed with romance, suspense, and action." - Independent Book Review

"A steamy romance with dark corners and a slow build, proving that good things come to those who wait." - Self-Publishing Review

I’ve never seen anyone so stunning––her olive complexion is flawless, her hair is dark brunette, almost black, but her eyes… they’re green, like the water of a Pacific island shore.

Jon clears his throat. “It’s a job,” he says, “not a blind date.”