Status Updates From The Polynesian Girl: Series...

It’s a yikes-burger with cheese. The dialogue doesn’t read as natural, Jade (MC1) comes off as a pervy western predator, and the writing is meh. I’m out.

So this woman of yet undetermined age spies a person she says has the body of a “young girl” bathing under a waterfall, points out that she doesn’t know if she’s even of legal age, then proceeds to not only continue the creepy peeping but Jill off while doing it. Did someone order the YIKES-burger? Bc I’ve got a half pounder here.

This begins my attempt at a kindle clean out while I’m on vacay of random free books I’ve acquired 🤞🏾🤞🏾😅

Giving this “trope” a try. Don’t really love her writing. It doesn’t flow. Seems very beginner and “to the point”. We will see.