Status Updates From Tethered to the World (Phan...

So many loose threads, the ploy doesn't make sense. She's supposed to be at a school but all the sudden now they're hunters and on a case? Where'd that come from--she's supposed to be on scholarship at a school to basically hide out. How does Rufus know about her uncle--there was no mention of her telling him about her uncle yet Rufus mentions he's missing. Too much dropped in that contradicts previous development.

That guy from the party was so obvious…

It's in third person. Gonna go cry myself to sleep