Status Updates From The Magnolia Palace

Idk man the 2 main characters are starting to feel a bit insufferable, like they just expect to be handed everything on a silver platter, like girl no it is 1919/1966 you have basically no rights
Also we need more background characters like it feels like only 3 people are speaking, the world is not totally fleshed out
I was feeling Veronica over Lillian but now I'm feeling the opposite

Love the characters and the setting, but I wish Lilian would have just told the truth it is easy and believable