Status Updates From The Dream Dancers - Book 1 ...

So I’m a little more than halfway done, but I find the story of the witches and what their mission is a little juvenile. Also, something that didn’t make sense was when the character in the northeast of the United States projected herself at 5:30 in the morning to a character in Scotland she said to herself that he would be in bed still, but that doesn’t make any sense since they are five hours ahead time-wise.