Status Updates From Perfect Score

Slowly getting into it, waiting for things to pick up up.

INCITING INCIDENT: Mr. Medina got hit by a train one morning before school. Joline saw it happen and she believes that someone is trying to cover up something with his death. Jo has been working on this case and has gotten nowhere, shes been skipping classes and not doing well on her tests because shes so wrapped up on this case.

Awesome :))

This is so-so thus far. Definitely better than my last read

ARCHETYPE QUEST: Joline, Sabrina, and Frankie all try to uncover what happened to their teacher. Joline and her friends find leads and uncover why the police didn't take Joline statement, no one that is involved in the case doesn't believe her and they're trying to find why their not being heard.

SUMMARY: Joline, frankie, and sabrina , all work together to uncover a mystery of her teacher from North Shore Prep that was murdered. joline broke in to his classroom and what she found was desterbing, she found that someone would change the SAT scores so kids would get in to an Ivy league school. the story goes by chapters.

VISUALIZE: Jolines feelings aren't being recognized as some one valid to Mr. Medinas murder case. her feelings aren't being valid because the rushed the case for no reason, unless their trying to cover something up. joline is trying to find why their rushing the case because they skipped over her interview. when ever Jo trys to dig deepper with the case Mrs. Medina bops around like it never happened.

TEXTS to WORLD: Jolene gave her statement to the officer stating that Mr. Medina's death wasn't an accident. she realized that when he was writing he was just writing random words and not taking her real statement . officers can do that in the real world, not taking your statement, because they thing it might be irrelevant to the case. when someone is involved in a murder case every statement is valid to the case.