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I’m fucking smiling from ear to ear

Grey’s writing frustrates me.
“Practice finally ended and I dragged myself off the pool deck, barely able to walk…. but now I ached”
2 sentences later,
“I could barely walk, and every part of me ached.”
This type of repetition is already common at 39 pages in.

Not terrible, but still ridiculously lazy. Especially the Dad apologising and paying for Yale for the mL OUT OF NO WHERE. They didn’t need to prove they loved eachother, they didn’t even try or demonstrate to the Governor why they would be good for his campaign or ANYTHING really. The dad literally just has a change of heart.

“Not all of us are athletically inclined” — you are a literal athlete, what do you MEAN?!