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I'd love to know why 90% of people who write time travel stories are convinced the most interesting thing ever is to have a character determined to not do anything interesting, ever, in hopes of preserving a fictional time line. It's a story, not a theoretical textbook. Do things. Reading I'd a lot more fun if the character isn't constantly whinging about patadoxes and refusing to engage with the world around them

Natasha is a modern gal, so why can’t she use freaking contractions? It makes all her speech sound stilted and awkward! It would be one thing if she used them in her time and then tried to speak more formally in the past as an attempt to blend in. But no. That’s not it at all. It’s annoying me.