Status Updates From Imprinted Tattoos (The Lost...

The large mandala heart is split equally into five separate parts. Each part has its own mandala pattern inside, and each one is a different colour. There's a deep forest green, bright sunshine yellow, rich Royal blue, dark maroon red and a dark, almost black, purple.

‘Sometimes you have to forget what you thought you wanted and remember what you deserve’.

‘You never know how strong you are until being strong is your only choice’.

Exam0le... tell me when you see the issue.
"No-one is to go anywhere alone; Brent is still around and looking for Sage. Hunter take Jax with you to go to her mothers and be vigilant. We leave in three hours, after lunch. Kai and Mav pack the bags and sort the notes out for the temporary team.” Hunter warns us all."

I know for a fact that this is a good author, so explain to me why this book reads like a watpad book?
So far she has confused details, like her current age, and telling the guys about her tats... I'm close to dnf.

FMC: Sage