Status Updates From The Justice of Kings (Empir...

I’m mostly enjoying the story, but I’m not enjoying our narrator, her decisions and our main character’s dismissiveness of problems at hand. It’s frustrating, like watching a car accident happen and not being able to do anything. The story is flowing and my problems are personal and mostly not logical, which is a relief.

I’m enjoying the read and I’m interested. The writing flows and I find little to no fault. So far I’m glad to be reading it and look forward to seeing the story unfold.