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It’s really good btw

so… only got 32 pages into this during my shift 😭 i think what’s tripping me up is that the narration shifts between third and first person in the same sentence without any breaks. “Carlotta closed her eyes and braced herself I hope I could keep from punching out her fuckin pea brain”. that’s how it’s written… i gotta really slow down and figure out who’s talking