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The writing overall improves during part 2. Worth sticking through the weaker chapters if you find the ideas interesting.
— Oct 07, 2026 06:29PM
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Deep-seated. Seated. Get an editor, man. The world and ideas are so cool, but this is a tough read at times. I feel like I’m reading a 2nd draft. Stop telling me how you feel and show me so I can be immersed, Jake.
— Oct 07, 2026 03:19AM
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