Status Updates From The Promise

this is the second separate instance where they've mentioned someone losing their virginity, and i'm not sure if there's supposed to be any significance to that or if it's supposed to be a reminder that i'm reading a book written by a man 🥸

bro im about the get mad. isn't reading supposed to be entertaining?!🗿

Whilst giving a compelling storyline with thought provoking moments elements of the storytelling are complexing. At times Galgut takes repeats himself far too much, does every paragraph need to have 5 sentence fragments for that to be your style? And the narration occasionally self-referencing is quite confusing, 99% no mention of a narrator and then a slide “trust me” is rather confusing.