Status Updates From Chased by the Light (Scion,...

Umm I feel like I’m reading an unedited clumsily written book! Kyle who was a cheater before is now following her and turned into a violent verbally abusive ex who’s demanding they get back together … it just makes very little sense and is way over the top . I’ve had enough i think

Just now one of the H’s just put a note in her pocket with his phone number on one side and “Hey beautiful, You’re absolutely stunning. Do you want to be my date to a party tonight? Let me know, Chase xxx” on the other … this guy is meant to be a “bad guy” and an alpha . This is eye rolling cringe worthy material …

I’m not sure if I will continue this one , so far the dialogue is irritating and unrealistic for example the h is in the car at a traffic light and sees her ex and in the tone frame of what should be a minute he sends her a text saying she was the best thing that happened to him and he misses her (before kissing some other girl then and there ) and she weird him a huge response txt.

Loving it so far!

LP you are killing me!! I love this book

This is my first time reading LP!! Holy moly she has sucked me into this story and I keep wanting more!! 🥰🥰