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Rereading for the first time in a few years and god, I love it, but the web serial style stands out.
In the third arc, the adventures are more episodic. Zorian summarizes and explains things aloud that the other characters should already know in half the scenes.
It's like Zorian never tells anybody anything in advance. It's maybe intentional, as Zach calls him out on being mysterious, but it feels contrived.
— Feb 05, 2025 11:23AM
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In the third arc, the adventures are more episodic. Zorian summarizes and explains things aloud that the other characters should already know in half the scenes.
It's like Zorian never tells anybody anything in advance. It's maybe intentional, as Zach calls him out on being mysterious, but it feels contrived.
