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Some very poignant moments. Unfortunately, scattershot chronology/overwritten prose makes it more tedious than it had to be. Often feels like he barely got past 'note gathering/brainstorming' phase of things and didn't work it nearly enough. A few shining moments, but the writing/structure keeps getting in the way of really letting his stories breathe. Those who relate to him more will get more out of it, probably.
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