Status Updates From Fated To The Alpha (Fated t...

So many writing issues, grammar and spelling mistakes, I am absolutely done writing notes on this book about how sentences and situations are written so badly that I am DNF in this book for my own sanity OK, let me

How in the pack house, where mind you, every Thursday night the whole pack of teenagers comes to stay, there is not a single cook, but one cleaner. Why are the main characters eating only takeaway in the bedroom on the bed when the food is mentioned. The math ain't mathing in this werewolf universe....

F¥ck me, why is she soooo stupid! I love werewolf stories, but for the FMC to grow up in their world and to be more oblivious than a human?! Or to treat an inner wolf like a talking pet instead of your alter ego. And because of this dumbness we have a plot!? I hope this story will improve........