Status Updates From Astrid Parker Doesn't Fail ...

I was almost ready to forgive Blake for the unremarkable writing in this series installment. But then I realize that people don’t quite speak like these characters. How many carpenters go around using “remiss” or someone else said “dapple”. But my little gay heart is reliving my past encounters and yearning for future romance while reading about two sapphics falling so I’ll pause in my negative remarks.

Ok I officially hate both lead characters. Wasn’t expecting two dickheads. I guess that’s why they’re matched but now I hate myself for reading on.

I might start my career in copy editing from spotting editing misses in these books. From missing words (83) to incorrect articles/typos (86).
Also I’m still early my up to the book. The writing could be better ngl.

I’m not sure I can relate to either character except maybe I’ll find something in Astrid’s late in life dating a woman pov? Time will tell that mystery.