Status Updates From Phantoms

Me, trying to convince my mom that I'm a grown woman at fourteen despite not having a job, not having a licenses, and spending all my time in the school library.

My friend said the dialogue was cringey and unrealistic and I kinda see it now. The dialogue does come off very story inserted. Tho I’m very much enjoying the story and the setting.

It’s good I enjoy his writing style. I also have the mass market paperback which might be my preferred copy of books.