Status Updates From Would You Rather

definitely bad but its in my room so i might as well read the whole thing

I love the characters and the basis of the story but the author screwed up on the central tension. Mia is tuned into everyone, but she doesn't see or hear the feelings of the person who is supposed to be her best friend since she was a child, even though everyone else does. And she says she can't be married to him because she has kidney disease and apparently, he will be okay with her suffering if there is no ring?