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Pati
is 90% done
Weirdly we never met Silas . Not even the family holiday. SMH...
— Aug 03, 2023 11:58AM
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Pati
is 78% done
Apparently the author forgot that they said Silas is his baby brother..... said it a couple of times.... now suddenly he's their oldest. SMH....
— Aug 03, 2023 09:24AM
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Pati
is 53% done
Seriously screwed up timeline. They're supposedly on their first date yet we've already seen several and been told of others. SMH....
— Aug 03, 2023 05:39AM
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Pati
is 51% done
Time line is jacked, missing words, wrong words, words that aren't real words, spelling mistakes.... SMH
— Aug 03, 2023 05:33AM
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Pati
is 37% done
In the blink of an eye his "fairly small car" became "the truck". SMH....
— Aug 02, 2023 06:45PM
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George
is finished
DNF at 35%. Sorry I even went that far.
The premise of Between the Lines had real promise. Unfortunately it was poorly executed and this book REALLY needs to be edited.
— Jun 22, 2023 03:23PM
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The premise of Between the Lines had real promise. Unfortunately it was poorly executed and this book REALLY needs to be edited.
