Status Updates From Nephi's Courage: Story of a...

I'm sorry this book is do badly written, because it is some important issues

"For real? I have heard of convicted child abusers the church excommunicated and then re-baptized, who later served in a calling with the youth. Is that policy real? Just because I am gay, I can’t serve with the youth? I love kids and I’m good with them. What are you afraid I’ll do?"

"Nephi’s bosom burned as their lips touched in a sweet, gentle kiss."

and later
"They both bridled their passions and slept, while dreaming of each other’s touch all night."

WTF! Who writes like that!

Nephi’s bosom burned as their lips touched in a sweet, gentle kiss.

and later
They both bridled their passions and slept, while dreaming of each other’s touch all night.

WTF!

This is like pulling teeth...
If it weren't because I was curious about the Mormon aspects of the story, I would have shot my phone by now.

Oh Lord, this is boring so far. Maybe it's because I already know all the church-things, but it is just one long, detailed explanation after another. I hope it will turn around.