Status Updates From Space Junk (Waymaker Wars #1)

"My probes are spread across eighty-four star systems."

Bullshit. It would take way longer than 200 years to reach that many star systems. Much less one. Unless you have ftl

"I found myself telling her everything. Everything, Domino,"

Why did he know everything? The whole point of a cell system is to ensure even if one person is compromised the mission still succeeds

"Time and again, they’d proved that they thrived on conflict rather than on progress. It was a fatal flaw in their species, and"

Lol. Thriving on conflict is a feature, not a bug. I doubt any species of any animal success survives if it didn't

"...launched herself at Nalla with glee."

Nalla, after 2 centuries of combat training immediately snapped Heddi's neck like a twig.

"She handed him a second tablet. This one had the Chinese symbol of strength on the cover. “This"

I'd take this book more seriously if he immediately took the tablet and smashed it into pieces right in front of her

"He had to hand it to Domino. She was smart."

Was she though?

"The first lash hit him across the face,"

In zero percent of history would a slaver lash a slave across the face. The only reason you would do that is if you're trying to kill someone

"“You’re Jack Halverton, correct?” Lasseter asked. He nodded

Why is he even there? Just because the Taoist blew up doesn't mean he wants to join the stupid interstellar mission. His girlfriend even mentioned he could get a job anywhere. Why wouldn't he just sign on with another salvage crew? Or hell, even give up and head PlanetSide to deal with the loss and trauma

"but size didn’t matter in zero G."

It's zero G, not zero mass, you idiot

"It’s the opportunity of a lifetime,” she said."

Right. That's because it will kill me