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1. typo formatting issue
2. typo unnecessary comma

typo missing comma

typo should be "this" instead of "his"

typo should be "alphas" not "alpha's"

btw we get it she has a flat stomach

(2) sooo if it's not ALL the Alphas' daughters who are like that, are we gonna meet any of them? or just the jealous, bitchy, "don't care about an education as a "real woman like my woman" would" women? like I'm sorry it's ridiculous. The other women aren't written well, and is Hayley going to make every dude (specifically every dude) laugh boisterously bc she's just so amazing? this is getting ridiculous

(1) "He tips his head, pointing to the very glamorous ladies around the room. They're highly educated but seem to be more interested in snagging a powerful husband than putting their brains to use."
oh yaaaaay I love it when men put down other women to hype another woman up.

holy shit are you kidding me? the chapter says the literal wrong name for the POV. this is bad

ofc all the other female characters are jealous of Hayley with some of the most cliche lines possible

typo spacing in hyphenated word

typo run-on

she wore "leather-look leggings" to a work conference? are you serious?

typo formatting error

typo "overprotective" isn't hyphenated

typo "dad" shouldn't be hyphenated here bc it's not being used as a name

typo formatting error

I think this oughta be "anymore"

typo additional word bc otherwise this sentence doesn't make much sense

typo should be "bangs" not "banga"

typo missing comma bc otherwise this sentence makes no sense