Status Updates From Heart of Dorkness, Book 1 (...

About to DNF
I think I know why this book is making me queasy. It's the tonal shift. It went from light comedy to deadly uncertainty. One of these cute little muppets might die and I don't like it. These teenage girls are about to pull a heist in a military training academy for a fanatical religious order that has seriously escalated the low key conflict between the gods.

I don't consider myself to be an anxious person, but when a fictional character is about to do something incredibly stupid for a bad reason it makes me want to stop reading and throw the book.
It really pisses me off. Especially if no train of thought or rational is given, just doing it for the plot is lazy ass writing and it makes me mostly mad, but also a little anxious and I do not like that.

Little bits of Cinnamon Bun, but more from Dead Tired.
I like those both so I don't mind.

interesting story idea, multiple POV and timelines.
Still there is something about it that keeps me on the fence