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is 70% done
Started off a little weaker than I would have expected, but has improved significantly. A singular grammatical error so far.
My biggest issue is that a frigate is said to be the biggest and most powerful ship produced by the NWR. A frigate is (depending on the era) by definition an escort ship with moderate weaponry. It should not be used in this context. Battlecruiser or battleship would have fit better.
— Jul 26, 2023 12:12AM
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My biggest issue is that a frigate is said to be the biggest and most powerful ship produced by the NWR. A frigate is (depending on the era) by definition an escort ship with moderate weaponry. It should not be used in this context. Battlecruiser or battleship would have fit better.
