Status Updates From Commodus

that's IT??????????? bruh oh hellll no. if you're too embarassed to write a sex scene don't write one! "he's literally perfect in bed and tender and he buys me roses and--" WHAT????? bro how can you characterize a roman emperor and a déranged one at that that way???

this is straight up historically inaccurate. there was no position of "empress" and emperor's wives had nowhere near as much power as them

so it's also gonna sanitize the fact that commodus stole that villa??? by calling the brothers he stole it from "sour faced"?

this book should be over by now but it's not even halfway doneeeeeeeee. fuck this is so dull!!!

im in hell. the author diagnosed commodus with bipolar. he just haaaad to include the female lead getting raped and not even fighting back (why do men always write it this way??), plus a completely irrelevant battle scene. why does commodus have trichotillomania. put down the DSM!!!!