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Chels
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This narrator is immediately absolutely horrible. I hear the story is good so I may swap to the kindle unlimited version.
— Sep 22, 2025 03:07PM
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James Quentin
is 38% done
Taking a whole star off for the author's overuse of italiccs to emphasise things.
Either believe in your ability to convey the depth of your character's emotions or don't. Don't hang a sign on everything you want the reader to feel in the dialogue.
Like nails on a chalkboard, as Americans say.
— Nov 28, 2023 02:28PM
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Either believe in your ability to convey the depth of your character's emotions or don't. Don't hang a sign on everything you want the reader to feel in the dialogue.
Like nails on a chalkboard, as Americans say.
