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How is it possible for them to want to kidnap 5 women in one night hahahahhahahah just wow

This was disappointing. No chemistry between the characters. Insta-love and insta-lust. Barely any dialogues with depth. Unnecessary inner monologues. Trivial information dump. Reduction of a strong FMC to a carer. MMC who sleeps through half the story and when he is awake he is sh!tty at communicating. Dull spicy scenes. Weak plot (was there even one?). Anticlimactic ending. Telling not showing type of writing.

Oh god that was the most anticlimactic meeting ever written. After all the lead-up the book prepared us for, it was heavily lacking emotion. They met, they hugged, they smiled and now they are a mixed-alien family. Who cares that her sister was taken. Who cares that she was worried. Disappointing.

This is supposed to be a cosy, warm moment where they share their deepest feelings and commit to each other because they feel such strong love for one another.

Bullsh*t.
He gave her an org*sm and she gave him one and with 5 mins of conversation they fell in love. Right. This book is so full of telling with no showing that I don’t believe a word written on these pages…