Status Updates From Tell No One

An excellent suspense read if that’s what you’re going on for, but suffers on my personal preference scale because the conflict becomes increasingly external (us—couple established vs them—secondary, underdeveloped bad guys). Interest faded out at 62%. Best suspense-romance type for me is when the conflict between the couple is strongly held throughout the conflict with the external enemy too.

You have to take a breath, Macbeth. In and out, Smout. You know how to make this work, Kirk.”

“Shut up and do it.” They were both glistening with perspiration. Tag sucked his lip when he pushed against him and Delaney registered that Tag was nervous too.

“That’s one inch. Ten to go,” Tag said.

Barbara Elsborg sprinkles humor in the most intense moments of this gripping story of suspense and survival.

I’m glad you’re not huge,” Tag said. “There’s such a thing as being too big. You’re big, but you’re not too big. I should shut up now, shouldn’t I? Because it sounds like I’m being insulting and I’m not.”

Elsborg, Barbara. Tell No One . self-pubbed. Kindle Edition.

eh

I'm so sorry, but the writing in this one is really bad. Hope it gets better.

OMG, I feel awful for Tag! Run run run!!