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This is soo adorable

Was this book better than the first two? Definitely. The characters had more depth, their reactions to each other felt more reasonable and overall, it just made more sense.

However, it is incredibly descriptive for such a short novella and the use of the foreign word kurv@ as a female’s name who betrayed the MMC is extremely inappropriate. Authors shouldn’t use foreign words without a complete background check.

This is the perfect example of telling not showing! It’s not enough that we get loads of unnecessary information, but why is there 14 pages of inner monologues/ descriptions?
14 pages!
For how short these books are, they suffer from some serious pacing issues. I can’t dnf anything, that includes any series I start so another 4 books will be torture if they don’t improve. And I don’t think they’ll improve.

You must be kidding me! Can authors do a little background search before they use foreign words?!

Kurva? Really? Couldn’t the author find a better name? Hungarians (myself), Polish, Czech, Slovakian, Slovenian, Finnish, Russian, Latvian, Lithuanian, Serbian and Croatian people use it as a swear word. It means f*ck and also sl*t / wh*re.

Was this a necessary name for a female? Feels misogynistic if you ask me O.o