Status Updates From Sweep of the Heart (Innkeep...

Just muscling through to the end at this point.

Impatient with the jumble of factions—too many to follow well—and the political machinations being explained in a stiff, turn-to-camera way.

Soooo many factions. I wonder if Gideon the Ninth was partly inspired by this.

Did writers not used to leave large spaces in chapters for transitions? I feel like it’s been done like that for a while.
Besides the rough scene transitions, unnecessarily using “had” after I, and over describing everything… well, I’ve been trying to read this book for way too long long