Status Updates From Whispers at Dusk (Blackbir...

Ok- the author redeemed that stupidity.

Oh but how could I forget. She’s not alone. No she’s with a ghost, who can’t help. But yay go her she’s not alone *insert eye roll*

Really. You’re in the bayou where the sheriff says it’s easy to get lost and these 2 agents didn’t even notice a trail until he “vanished” into it- AND YOUR GOING TO SEPARATE. This is like one of those cheesy horror films where your yelling at the dumbasses to stick together because there’s a killer on the loose

This story is so far fetched with this “master”. Your telling me this guy flies to a new country and within a day finds an advent follower just sitting in the graveyard and recruits him? None of this is plausible and the paranormal aspect of talking to ghosts is practically non existent

I’m also kind of sick of hearing everyone, including this wack job, wax poetic about the beauty of Dela

Really they’ve known each other a few days and she’s his “special best friend”. These characters don’t know each other AT ALL. Like they never talk, they’re just running after a bad guy. There’s no chemistry, no banter, no anything between them