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def skip any and all sex scenes

if i praise the action scenes
i need to do the opposite for everything else

also
more than a few times lack of editing and just shit writing was evident and abound

i hope the rest of the series are better ..
but i doubt it

this ending was also meh
i skipped over it entirely

i think i rated this three stars initially
and i’ll keep that bc of the good i mentioned

another good scene i forgot until now was the fmc and the boy, again
this time abducted and then escaping

i prob need to make a note of this if i ever reread this book
to skip everything but this handful of scenes

and
the story telling to the crowd afterwards could’ve been better
i wouldnt have minded a recap of her heroics

it was written okay but repetitive in a boring way

^so only those two scenes i mentioned
so far

that are the sole reason i’ll be adding this book to my heroines list
if it’s not already on there

i do have to clarify that just bc it’s on that list/shelf/tag
doesnt mean the entire book and the fmc as a whole is the best heroine

i need to be specific about those scenes of hers bc i don’t like her otherwise at all

so another scene i forgot about

was the market attack scene with the fmc and the boy
that was great

the sex and plot and everything else is boring as fuck though

i’m now slightly more curious about the other human women though

at times this fmc is a great heroine
but then the author writes her to be this whimpering yet mean girl bitch?? whatever

she’s very wishy washy

this is a reread
idr why i didnt finish the series

the only part i remembered was the start with the escape

idr mmc being an alien gargoyle vampire idk what
and other details

tbh
atm
i’m feeling suicidal almost
generally unwell
stressed for days
weeks now

hormones maybe
life definitely

i hate everyone
i hate myself
i hate shit books

i want to sleep and dream and never wake up